Lee
Applause and cheers echo in the
Long hall as the beginning of a new journey
Begins.
She meets his eyes
Mirroring his starry filled gaze with her own
She watches him pass by her
A new journey begins.
Standing she follows as she always has,
Wondering
What will become of them? Everything
Will be different
He takes his place and she hers at the
Snow white table
So elegant, so deceiving
She accepts his hand
The hand of a master
And gracefully, regretfully
Glides with him across the
Icy floor.
A new journey begins
Over and over/Over and over/I fall for you/Over and over/Over and over/I try not to
2 comments:
mmm, makes me think of ice skating.
I know you hated attempting to emulate other writers, though I certainly give you credit for your attempt to appease me with some Lee-esque imagery ("Applause and cheers echo in the
Long hall" and "She meets his eyes
Mirroring his starry filled gaze with her own").
Your best lines are certainly reflective of your own style (as it should be): "So elegant, so deceiving" and "Glides with him across the Icy floor."
-Great lines...
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